This is actually a really good idea i think...my story i mean.
I used to be able to instantly feel what the characters might feel...
But it seems like I can't with this one. Why? Everything feels so forced. I'm actually taking time with character development and plot....but for some reason it's like the emotion is lost...
Not to mention there's so much I'm trying to control...not making it seem like a story that we've already read...not using "stock phrases" or cliche phrases...not making the characters stereotypical...adding just enough, and just the right details..
and that's not even counting mechanics...grammar and syntax and the like...
And I really want it to work out...because it seems that no matter what story we read, it's like we don't feel sorry for the characters, when something bad happens to them. It'd be nice if mine was one of the first...
Heh...maybe it's because I spend all of my emotional energy in real life. Yappari, it seems that you just can't beat real life. It's just far too complex to be matched by any purely fictional story.
Haven't really practiced guitar as much as I'd like to..maybe I can tomorrow..I just want some time by myself...
It also seems like I'm unable to sing decently either...which is rather disappointing...
Losing my touch...I guess....
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